Self evaluation of task two

• What is the thesis for your paper? How Jay did not graduate and his views on me going to school.
• List the main points you make in your paper. How education can improve your life.
• What was the most helpful advice you received from your peer evaluation? Repeating things.
• What was the most helpful information you received in class for your paper? Capitalization of things that arent suppose to be.
• How many drafts of this paper do you think you wrote and how/when did you write them? For example, did you compose at the keyboard, did you write lots of notes to yourself, did you pre-write or outline, did you write in small chunks of time or sit down and produce an entire draft at one sitting? I had three drafts.  I had notes first, then I wrote on the computer, then made addtional notes on the paper draft, then re-typed.
• What would you do differently with this paper to make it more effectively, or what did you try to do that you just don’t think you got a good handle on? Get more supporting details
• What are most pleased with about this paper? I'm pleased with the fact that I got a chance to talk to my father about his life without education and how beneficial it is to me that I will have one.